For those of you who missed it, the rules are quite simple; I provide you with an image, and your objective is to write a oneshot/short story fic that in someway connects to the picture provided. I only ask that you use proper spelling, grammar, and punctuation throughout, that you write a minimum of 3000 words, and refrain from any sort of fetishes that detract too much from the image of focus (vore, expansion, foot, etc).
And here is the image in question that your fics should be centered around:
(Disclaimer: Image belongs to Slave Toon. I claim no ownership of this image in any way!)
So... yeah! I hope this image gives you the inspiration to come up with something awesome! ^____^ Oh, and you're free to write and post your entry wherever you please, just as long as you provide a link to your finished work. And to make things interesting, if you're familiar with my story "Sex Education: Anko Mitarashi Style," aka "SE:AMS", you're free to set your entry in the realm of this story's timeline, just as long as you credit SE:AMS to me.
Whoever wins this contest gets a free oneshot fanfic commission from me, and it WON'T take over a year to complete! :P
Anyway, if this contest interests you, I do require a minimum of 5 participants, so spread the word to as many people as you can!
Now then, onto a topic that's a bit more.... touchy. As most of you might be aware, I've recently posted a story on FF called "Kushina's Wife Test," and it's received quite a bit of attention... not all of it good :/
While this has been one of the most popular writings I've made in a long time, it's also by far the most controversial, and the latter is why I need to address the masses, because some of the comments that I've received about it are... well, they're something that need being addressed.
Update 11/17/13: To start off, there's a jackass by the username of God-ShadowEx100 has even straight-up attacked me, claiming that he'll see to it that my "bitch ass is banned, and my story is removed from the site." Also going onto say that he reported my story for adult content and the fact that "Hinata is a useless whore." Unacceptable! Aside from him, though...
Possibly the most common complaint is that the story of the first chapter was too rushed. This I honestly must apologize for, because first impressions are everything if a story is to be successful, and all other complaints aside, I certainly did not make a very good first impression of my story, given how poorly executed this first entry was. And I assure you, this is a mistake that I have no interest in repeating in future chapters.
Probably half of the other comments (I'm not naming any names, but if you're reading this, you know who you are!) that I've gotten about "Kushina's Wife Test", however, have been angry complaints, mostly in regards to the upcoming Yuri and incest warned about in the story's description. First of all, I placed that warning there for a reason; I know that not everyone likes, or can even stomach these story elements, so I placed them here as a warning to anyone who doesn't like them.
If you don't like Yuri, that's fine! If you don't like incest, that's fine! But I've legitimately warned you all about both of these things, so anyone who doesn't like it has no right to complain! If you don't like it, then don't read it, simple as that.
Anyway, while I don't mind criticism, it seems that all some people can see from this is negatives. People hate that the chapter was rushed, people hate that Kushina played with Hinata's boobs (Meant to be playful, teasing act, NOT a flirtatious one), people hate that Naruto and Hinata will be 'cheating on each other' with Kushina.... and THAT is the main topic I want to discuss.
What so many people obviously don't understand is that while, yes, both Naruto and Hinata will later be doing the nasty with Kushina, that means NOTHING! Their time in the bedroom with the Red-Hot Habanero is for the purpose of teaching. I thought I had established this clearly enough right from the title of the story, Kushina wants to train Naruto and Hinata so that they're perfect for each other when they marry. This is NOT just going to be random OOC sex for the sake of sex appeal; this is going to be purposeful, something that adds to the story significantly, especially in the case of Naruto's time with Kushina.
(Above: Yes, both of these things will be happening in the story. And no, this is NOT just mindless sex, nor cheating on either end!)
In short, Kushina's giving her son and daughter-in-law a personal, hands-on sexual education and nothing more... Wait, what?! Doesn't that sound like a really familiar premise? Like another certain story I've written that you all love so much? Seriously, if so many of you are okay with Naruto and Hinata having sexual activities with other people in SE:AMS, even after they form a relationship with each other, and after they're basically engaged to one another in the closing chapters, why the hell do you have problems with me doing the exact same thing with this story?
Naruto and Hinata have an understanding with one another in both of these stories, so to argue that to have sex with anyone other than each other is 'cheating', when all they're really doing by having sex with Kushina is learning what she has to teach them, is both incorrect and foolish.
If it's problems with me looking like a 'one-trick pony', I can honestly see where you're coming from, but I've yet to hear someone actually make that accusation, so I fail to understand why there's any kind of problem. And I realize that not everyone who read this story has read SE:AMS, but the fact that I'm getting so much backlash over this issue in the first place is just insane!
And another thing: This started out as a commission for Lawman09, so I deserve NO hatred for writing this story, and you have no right to complain about any of its content. The decision to turn it into a full story and not just a one-shot was admittedly my decision, but that doesn't change the fact that this idea came from Lawman09, not me, and neither one of us deserves any kind of backlash in turn.
I've had a fair share of people giving me crap over the years for some of my work, and I've been forgiving of it, but I have little patience for those who are condemning KWT so quickly for things that I've always done (sure, incest is a new one for me, but that's beside the point), and even less for those condemning these things before the story has even begun to pick up!
If you don't like yuri and/or incest, I don't hold that against you, but if that's your problem, then keep it to yourself, because I've given you advanced warning, and you have no right to complain about it to me. And if your morality is so inflexible that you're against the idea of two fictional characters having sexual activity of any kind with another character, then I really don't know what to say to you!
Okay, sorry if I seem to be getting a little angry. All hatred aside, this story will continue as planned. In fact, I do hope to post the second chapter real soon!
So you have some of this to look forward to! ^
Oh! and one last thing: if this literature contest thing can be an ongoing thing, what other series besides Naruto do YOU want to see be used for the base image for future contests? Leave your thoughts below! :)
I forgot to ask in my comment on the other page. For future reference, what fetishes do you count as off limits? I'm not into overboard fetishes, but my standards might differ from yours.
ReplyDeleteAs I noted, Foot, vore, expansion/inflation are the main ones that are off-limits. Basically, if it backs the direction of the story too far away from the focal point (being the image provided, of course), it's off limits.
ReplyDeleteHi there, the name is emilbootanimefreak a humble Fanfic reader from FF.net. Now it's only now that I found you on FF.net thanks to another writer named Lord Farsight taking on your contest and I just want to tell you that I'm LOVING "Kushina's Wife Test" it's a nice fic even though like you said the 1st chapter was a bit rushed but hey this is a "Test" fic right? So mistakes are not surprising to find here, what's important is the core idea of fic nd you could fix the storyline if you want in the future. Anyways I just want to give my support for you against all those A**hole who (in my opinion) are just plain bullying, I mean if they didn't like the fic then don't read right? But just in case they actually do report you, I just wanna ask if you're posting your fic in any other site? If you want I could recommend some good sites and you can just announce in FF.net where your fans (myself included) can continue to read your work. Also just to let you know I'll be reading your other fics, the one that you "discontinued" to see if there's anyway I could help you out with ideas and opinions since I do like to help out writers who need opinions and such and if you want to chat hey leave me a message on FF.net XD
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